Reviews for The Right Parts
aesthetic umbrella chapter 2 . 4/25/2016
oML I JUST SAW THIS
THANKS BOO

Jase and Jeren are hilarious. I love them already! XD
Update when you can if you're still interested! Looking forward to it! :)
Sarahaahahhahaha chapter 2 . 3/23/2016
OMFG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! 3
Not as much as Nutella tho
Duh
pipergrace chapter 2 . 3/19/2016
SOOOOOOOO GOOOOODDDDD PLEASE UPDATE SOONNNN
Cherry chapter 2 . 3/17/2016
Well. That just happened.
SnowflakeSoup chapter 2 . 3/17/2016
omg jeren
(damnnnnnnnnnnnn these kids have got good credentials! wow)
hee hee how did i know jeren was gonna do this?
can't wait for the next chapter, precie!
Ethempat chapter 2 . 3/17/2016
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
EEEEE I IS LOVE THIS SO MUCH I LIKE I LOVE MEEEEE LIKE-YYYY

I think I might be going a little loony.

But awkwardness aside, I really like this. cx Don't rush yourself with updating, and it writer's block hits, don't write until you feel comfortable to.

I really like the end of this chapter, when Jase (I think) screams "NO CLEAVAGE!"

Oh god it's so beautiful. *wipes away a tear*
Cherry chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Shutoku! I remember that from Kuroko no Basuke. By the way, great prologue! I really like the twins. They seem like cool characters.
Da Kaleidoscope chapter 2 . 3/17/2016
An ACT score of 35?!

I got 40 on a practice one. I think there was an error with the machine...
owlwrite chapter 2 . 3/17/2016
SO GOODDD!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :D
SnowflakeSoup chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
ooooh interesting... i'd love to see more!
although, it is a bit difficult to tell jeren and jace apart at times... i hope their characters become easier to distinguish later?
btw i haven't talked to you in a while! how are you?
-Snowy
aesthetic umbrella chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
Kuroko no Basket oml
ish good, i like it so far!
Da Kaleidoscope chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
Interesting. I would like to see where this will go.
owlwrite chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
This story is great and I love it! :) pls update soon!
LostCriesofTime chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
This is such a cool story, I like your characters (they were kinda like anime characters who came alive in my head with mannerisms and facial expressions because you set them up so well) and the idea is a timeless classic.

I can't wait to see what you do with it and I definitely look forward to reading more.

Great work!