Reviews for After I Was Done Trying To Fix Yo (Draft 1)
Thomassino chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
I enjoyed reading this, a nice twist to a brilliant piece of fiction; a well-written story. The only comment on the writing itself is the use of commas, I'm no expert but I would check through the story sentence-wise, read each sentence without the commas and see if it 'sounds' right...