Reviews for The Bad Boy Is My Babysitter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm kind of disappointed that you haven't updated the story in a while, but my track record doesn't exactly leave me room to blame either. I like where the story is going and would love to see you continue it when you have the chance. I've already begun speculating on what is in the basement, and how the interaction between Luca and Claudia is going to play out. That first chapter was a little confusing though, maybe because I don't know what the acronym stands for. I'm still not completely sure if it was switching points of view, points in time, or both. And if it was moving in time, which direction? I guess I'm saying that with a little more clarity on the first chapter, your story could become a lot more promising. More than it already is, that is. Anyways, I'll follow this story for now. Hope you start updating again soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Suspenseful... Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope more chapters are coming soon. |
![]() ![]() Hello! I'm new here. First of all, fuck you. I hate cliffhangers (even though I love them at the same time) Furthermore, fantastic story, please update soon! Keep up the good work! 3 |
![]() ![]() Oh, geez! What is in the basement? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oooooo what is in the basement? got me curious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your colorful adjectives. And I have to say that so far the cousin who seems to “get away with everything” by far is my favorite character.:) Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooh what a cool story. I love your main character, she's realistic and sympathetic. I can't wait to meet the "hot guy" and see how Nerissa reacts :P I really like your writing style, its great. I can't wait to read more :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story so far! I totally agree with her about books! There is nothing quite as amazing as they are :) |