|Reviews for Sunfire|
| ModernQuill chapter 3 . 5/2/2016
So far I like the description in the story, it's very effective in painting a picture for the reader. I don't see any spelling or grammar errors either. However, your chapters are way too short. These past three chapters could've easily been a half of one chapter, and you have about three paragraphs of story. I don't know f the format is something that's supposed to contribute to the storytelling,but so far I don't get it.