|Reviews for Mary Queen of Scots|
| sweetladyjane2012 chapter 7 . 3/8/2017
I hope Thomas Seymour will be executed soon!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
Its sooo good!
| sweetladyjane2012 chapter 5 . 8/29/2016
I really hate Seymour, he's such a jerk...I do like Edward a lot better now...I wonder if Mary might be preggers?
| Wendy Thompson135th chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
Some goofs slipped through the proofreading. Three examples are:
the Dauphin of France, to whom I was to wed. -'to whom I was to be wed'. OR 'whom I was to wed'.
it would time for my mother to return.. .-it would be time.. .
"Good morning your highness, I am Lady Anne Seymour. I have been tasked by His Majesty -". -"Good morning COMMA, your highness... .(direct address is set off with a pair of punctuation marks) I have been tasked... . Contemporary slang. Try: I have been dispatched by his majesty to ...
| sweetladyjane2012 chapter 3 . 4/22/2016
Edward is a spoiled brat and a jerk...
| sweetladyjane2012 chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
Aw poor Mary...
| Ninety chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
This is amazing! The opening is really mature and brings you immediately into this world of royalty. I love the accurate historical detail and the specific, elegant way that you write. I'm excited to read more! :)