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Hi there! I enjoyed reading this. You have some really nice descriptions, like the "starburst colors" of the sunset, and I enjoyed how you set the plot in motion-one of my worst nightmares is the thought of being alone in my apartment and discovering someone else is there, so it was very easy to empathize with Dria. (Although I do wonder why her first reaction was to call Keira, and not to call the police.) Anyway, thanks for sharing. I'm very curious about Zeke! _

I must say I'm intrigued by this. The only thing I find kinda off is how the two talk about how everything will change (which is a pretty drastic thing) in a very confident, assured way but aren't bothered at all by it or more curious about said change. Aside from that, it looks good!