|Reviews for Mythical Mirage Online|
| Shang chapter 1 . 9/17/2018
A pretty good start, if a bit slow for an adventure tale. I can appreciate you taking the time to paint a clearer picture of the main protagonist.
I like your style of narration; the descriptions aren't overly long nor too short and blend nicely with dialogue. The 'everyday' vibe is pretty strong and, I imagine, that is what you were aiming at. Plotwise not much can be said yet, as the story didn't really go into its supposed territory, but you have a knack for spinning the story to make the mundane read nicely.
Overall you peeked my interested and I'll be returning to read more in the near future.
| villainous chapter 10 . 12/5/2016
UGH PLEASE DONT TELL ME MICCHI IS WHO I THINK IT IS UGH PLEASE NO WILL NEVER LIKE THE ONE I AM THINKING OF BUT IF MOXIE IS FROM UTSUNOMIYA AND WELL FUCK SHES PROBABLY THE REASON RIGHT
| villainous chapter 9 . 12/5/2016
WOW THIS WAS GREAT BUT WHAT MADE THIS EVEN GREATER FOR ME IS THAT I JUST FINISHED ALL OF THE LLL's AND AT THE END OF 5 WHEN YOU MENTIONED IT WAS LIKE A WRAP UP FOR MMO I WAS LIKE LOL BETTER READ THAT BEFORE THIS AND OMG YES WOW OMG I CANT I KINDA WAS WAITING TO SEE IF MOXIE WAS WHO I THOUGHT SHE WAS AND THEN LADY ITORA OMG OMG OMG THAT ANSWERS MY DAMN QUESTION FOR WHEN IT HAPPENED LIKE YIKES WOO SO THIS YES
| Deieted0909 chapter 33 . 6/5/2016
Just finished reading the whole story. Well done Crissey-Chan!
The world you created was very imaginative without feeling like a rip-off of other Fantasy worlds. I have to say the creepiest element to all this was their comatose bodies. Imagining a useless human body while the mind is trapped in a game... gave me goosebumps!
The last scene in the hospital with Tomo and Aya was just so cute. I want to see a short-story of their relationship following their reunion.
Well written, lots of action, cutesy moments, and a great payoff!
| Deieted0909 chapter 8 . 6/3/2016
Okay I'm really backed up leaving comments on this story. Sorry Crissey-chan.
So far, this chapter has stuck out to me the most. It's REALLY messed up. All these characters are working their asses off fighting for their lives and in reality, they're just comatose bodies slaves to what their trapped minds. It makes me never want to get involved with virtual reality games :(
But I really like this story and can't wait to finish it.
| OnlyAHuman chapter 1 . 5/19/2016
This is an awesome story I loved reading it and it was a good read, though a bit short(took me just over an hour to read) it was extremely well written save a few typos.
| ROCuevas chapter 34 . 5/8/2016
Ooh this was quite interesting. A glossary was really neat addition.
| ROCuevas chapter 33 . 5/8/2016
Truly awesome story this was to read.
| ROCuevas chapter 32 . 5/8/2016
Hopefully it will be normal again.
| readingchameleon chapter 34 . 5/8/2016
Hey, thanks for writing this story. I didn't think I'd enjoy it at first, but you proved me wrong!
| its-ackim95 chapter 34 . 5/8/2016
I have to say this is one of my favourite stories that you have written
| Yumko Yummy chapter 34 . 5/8/2016
best anime ever! hahaha :D would like to read a story about what happens next with the main couple. anyways awesome anime there should be anime like this with a girl lead. i would watch that. hahaha
| ROCuevas chapter 31 . 5/6/2016
LOL. Old. XD
| ROCuevas chapter 30 . 5/6/2016
Tomoko will be better. She will be.
| ROCuevas chapter 29 . 5/6/2016
Quite well done.