Reviews for An Average Idea
Cam0312 chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
This is so great. I loved the immense detail on how the character felt and loved that you actually named the place that the character lived in instead of leaving the reader to wonder. And wonderful cliff hanger at the end. Good job!
Zukafu Chiriamoto chapter 1 . 4/11/2016
Question, is that first line supposed to be repeated...? Is this part of the illogical being logical?
I really liked this though. Poetically written and sounds like the start of something big.

Though, I do have to say, watch out for punctuation mistakes - like the missing full stop at the end of the first sentence - and bits like that.

All the best,
invisiblehandicap chapter 1 . 4/11/2016
Yes make it happen. Nice cutie boy picture.