Reviews for Hidden War
Cae chapter 1 . 4/13/2016
This is promising. You probably can promote your story further by editing your summary, so it has perfect (or as close to it as possible) grammar and punctuation. I do not mean to sound like a crazy grammar (an punctuation) freak, but, it would help.

Your story, the content, plot development, storyline and characterisation seem decent. This could evolve into a pretty good story if you dedicate time to it.

Yours Sincerely,