Lovely chapter. I missed them so much. A new house for the Hands of Jove between Asteria and Llyed ha? I wonder about the citizen's reaction to having Thanatos for a neighbour. Please dont make us wait for long!

I was not expecting this but I loved it. Worth the wait!

Little clueless Zephyr! That was fun to read but I missed Anne.

I liked this flashback. It was interesting to have the insights. So glad to hear from you after 2 months!

Thanatos sounded cute as a kid...

This was a nice update and I can guess how he got lured to the evil woman he had killed...

I'm very fond of this and you, so dont worry what pace you are writing at I'll continue to check back and read... also perfect name for the smallest sister, seems pretentious and cruel

I also can't get over how much Lledans know about women. Lolz.

I didn't like it whenever you use a POV other than Anne and Zeph. But now I like reading what others think about them.

Btw, I want to know what happened to Teles in the last update. I hope you write about that soon.

Thank you!

Ive been dying for a new chapter so here's a review in return! :) i quite like the lore on lledan culture and i am intrigued by this new development with the sisters! Cant wait to see what trouble opal gets into. However, i thought that people have a tendency to show their best selves in front of anne? What could have possibly motivated opal to use her powers in such a situation, knowing that thanos disapporves of it? I assume they know about what happened to their mother? Is it because first and seconds are so confident in their powers that they feel as if they can do whatever they want without impunity?

I need more background on miranda and her sisters though! And perhaps some indication of their age? Seems as if the gap is large, large enough like the sisters are acting cheeky and mischievous like children? Opal seems like the middle child but acts like a teenager, natalie could be any age but i assume low 20s as she can go to university? Its rare to see someone fear life so much so maybe shes the equivalent of a very low self esteem person irl?

So many questions here... hope youre happy to recieve this!

Miranda should give her sister Opal a headslap...

hmm, hmm, lots to ponder. thanks for the update

Mmmm, leather is Jade's favorite smell... doth I detect a pervert? :D

I thought at first that Teles was just pretending and imagining on his way to see the queen. This chapter didn't make much sense to me. Maybe it'd make better sense in context of the grand scheme or whatever.

I forgot this story...

Ive missed this story! I haven't had the time to read it since you posted the 10th chapter, but I'm so glad that I got to binge these last chapters! I miss Zephyr and Anne so much! Can't wait for your next installment! 3

Dammit, unexpected tears. I am homesick too

I did not expect Anne to start crying. But the way you wrote it was a seamless transition. It made sense both in plot and actions of characters. Anne has this beautiful duplicity about her. She is strong; handles the challenges and the insanity of her situation. But she lets herself be vulnerable. I love this. She feels so real. I understand her reactions. I want to be her friend. Zephyr has this depth as well. They are engaging as individuals and a couple. I am curious about where the plot is leading. But I enjoyed reading this chapter. It's comforting to read about the two of them just being together.

Thanks for continuing to write.