oh my gosh! dont kill marleys bro, she would be too pitiful then. pls pls update soon

Aww man! I really need more chapters! I think I like Wade more now...

I feel so sorry for Marley... Another Missy... *sigh*

Yes Wade, you go man. Thank you for updating.

First off, shortest chapter EVER! Hate you. Lol.
Secondly, good luck on your exams! I understand how those are.
Thirdly, I'm just throwing out some ideas of where I think you can go with this story, (chose 1; chose all; chose none - doesn't matter. Just trying to be helpful. I totally understand writer's block):
1) Have her spend a day with Carol. Have Carol take on the motherly role she doesn't have around anymore. Let them go out and have a fun "mother-daughter" day. I think it will help stabilize Marley and give us a great insight to their relationship and who Carol really is. Have Carol talk about her parents. Crazy stuff they used to do as kids, how they helped her, what kind of people they were. All so that not only Marley gets a better sense of who her parents were but we do as well.
2) This one may be a bit hard to see and/or read but you could potentially have Marley's brother die. Obviously it's a sad, horrible event especially since she'd pretty much be an orphan but it would give you many chapters to draw upon and write. How Carol and her family help her out, who she goes to for comfort (Wade;Tyler), who's really there for her and so on. Does she push people away? Do people save her? Does she save herself? Etc. Life is mysterious and not always pleasant- simply put: life happens. It also continues the suspense of the book so that we wanna wrap our arms around you and shake you for answers of who she wants but with the grieving process, although the issues are still there in her mind it's put aside and then afterwards that's how she really makes her decision because at that point it'll just come naturally to her. Who was more there for her than the other - Wade or Tyler? Do did she feel more comfortable with? Who brought back out her smile? Etc.
3) Bring some stranger danger candy into the mix. A sexy bad boy type who is captured by Marley and makes it obvious about how he wants to woo her or whatever his intentions are. It'd probably make Wade and Tyler more jealous but I mean they have Missy and Jessica hanging all over them all the time so who's to say Marley can't hang with her scrumptious new bad boy? Shake things up a bit. Doesn't have to be all lovey dovey all the time. Underlining romance sometimes is the best because 2 parties are clueless to how they feel for each other but YOU know and YOU feel it which really gets to you.
Know what I mean?
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i really liked this. it explains some of the crap tyler's done and why he does it. i relly liked it. maybe do one for wade?

this chapter was really kawaii 3 especially the part with Wade and Marley and the ankle. *Squeals like a fangirl*

At this point I serlsy have no idea who Marleys goina end up with. I do like both guys (\0.0/)

Don't worry, your exams are more important. Take your time. Still looking forward to your updates though :)

Awww! Wish you luck in your exams. Don't rush to bring us the next chapter, its all right!

I dunno. I think Wade kind of reminds me of my father's name - Wayne.
I also had a few friends named Wayne who wanted to date me and I think it's just so weird to date somebody with the same name as a parent.
Also, I think the name is just plain out right stupid. Haha. No offense to you or anything.

I do wonder who she's going to chose but at this point in time it would totally annoy the hell out of me to see Tyler still with Missy and Jessica all over Wade. How can I make my choice if these 2 bimbo's are all over them and making it so awkward?! Ugh, lol.

Good chapter though. :)
Seemed like filler.

LOL! Awkward, much...

Hey, you went to Australia as well? Me too! Well, I'm still technically in Australia. Where did you go? EEEEEE!

Things are always getting interesting in this story! And how can I not love Wade?! He has the same name as Deadpool :P shipshipship! Amazing, please continue!

Hmm, you've got me. I sort of like Wade, (hate his name) and I like Tyler. Damn this! I don't like Jessica. Ugh, go away. She's known him for like, what, 10 minutes! GRR

TYLER! DON'T YOU DARE WADE ME! HIS NAME EVEN SUCKS! IT MUST BE TYLER!