Reviews for Don't Be Afraid
Malia B chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
ABBY, THIS WAS SOOOOOOO GOOD, YOU LEFT ME ON MY SEAT THE WHOLE TIME. i really liked all the action you put into this and how descriptive you were on so many parts. the one thing i didn't though was, WHERE THE HECK AM I, BRO! any way i liked your massage at the end, and i want you to keep writing story's like this. :D
DaPeopleEaters chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
This started off as a very real story. All of the characters seemed so relatable and real, even the cashier. Maybe a little more description about why they were twenty seven miles away from any town? Anyway, the climax scene was done well, and it is a bit more than extraordinary that she got out of that alive. You should definitely elaborate on the chances of surviving that because I think that would add some extra disbelief, but that's not up to me.

In the hospital is where the characters seem odd to me, but not bad. They seem to switch moods after every line. Overall, this was a great story and you've earned a favorite.