|Reviews for The Dove Bounty|
| Fryvi chapter 5 . 11/7/2016
Aaw, good thing he has Strauss to help him with the trauma! :)
| kimmiet0310 chapter 5 . 11/3/2016
I love love love Strauss and Dove. And this whole story, so far.
Thank you for updating. Can't wait to see what you update next.
(I'm sorry I'm not more detailed but I'm exhausted and quite frankly my brain isn't working right now. Lol.)
Oh but I can say I was super excited when I realized you had updated. Made my night.
| Kimmie chapter 4 . 8/30/2016
Ah. I missed these two. So glad Strauss came in time. I'm also happy that Dove is finally, hopefully, giving in to him.
I love them. Keep up the good work. Thank you for the update and can't wait to see where this story goes. : )
| havreflarn chapter 4 . 8/27/2016
Thank you so much for this! It was just what I needed yesterday to keep me going :)
I love it so much! I swear, every time the orange eyes send a jolt of emotion through Dover, it makes me shiver, so good
So actually I do have some problems reading something like rape or attempted rape, but since you issued the warning and I had a strong feeling, that Strauss would come to the rescue, it didn't trigger me but I was able to really enjoy it without all the angst and shock I normally go through. I liked that. Although Strauss really did take his time, in the end I really began to doubt, if he would come or not... But then the wait was so worth it!
But I love Strauss as the knight in shining armor! And I sooooooo love and appreciated how he was so cool and collected afterwards that he thought to make Dover face the attacker, to see what he has become. That he let Dover have his rage till it became destructive towards the ship. It's maybe all details, but these are the details which makes it so precious...
I found it curious, that in your fantasy world, space ships seem to have enough water to hand wash bowls in the kitchen :P And I wonder, why Strauss is always stressing the forever. Has he some kind of life mates going or something?
| Fryvi chapter 4 . 8/26/2016
I've always preferred dubcon over noncon, so I very much liked that the bad guy didn't get to go all the way.
I didn't really dislike the chapter though, and I like how it's bringing him closer to Strauss :D
| jj chapter 3 . 8/5/2016
I really like this story so far! I hope you continue it soon. Thanks!
| jj chapter 3 . 6/17/2016
I just read the first 3 chapters, and I love them! I can't wait to see what happens next!
| Kimmie chapter 3 . 6/13/2016
I love them. Poor Dove. I feel bad for Strauss too though.
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Keep up the good work. : )
| Fryvi chapter 3 . 6/12/2016
Nice work on the commitment issues at the end.
And on the rest of it x) They clearly have feelings for ach other! Though I guess it still remains to work out exactly what those feelings are :p
| Calico Trayce chapter 3 . 6/12/2016
Yes - yes - yes! I know I've said these things before, but I love this chapter! xD
Everything from Noosa's personality, to Dove's thoughts, and holy eff-balls it was such a hot tease. LOL. Damn Strauss has some moves. I wanted him to get a little rough with Dove at the end of the chapter. Like, "Wtf? Where do you think you're going you hot piece of work?" Hahahaha. Ugh... I'm really loving the progress of their relationship. It's hard to go from being bullied to being seriously pursued, and Dove is so sweet with his fear of change. I totally understand his reluctance but -
AGH GET IT ON DAMNIT! lololol! Just kidding.
Anyway, it's so freaking hot. I can't wait for the next chapter! You're incredible, my friend! I hope Dove takes that feline dick up his ass soon. Bwahahaha. :D
| Fryvi chapter 2 . 6/1/2016
Ooh, nice! With those two alone for three days, who knows what will happen ;D I like how the feline is more like a fierce panter rather than a cute house cat and all the other species you have, very interesting. Looking forward to reading more!
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/9/2016
Ah I really love this plot line and I'm so looking forward to what happens next! Please do keep up this story. It's only 2 chapters in but it's already intriguing and the desire between them is so intense, it's awesome. Thank you for creating it and I hope you have a great day!
| kimmiet0310 chapter 2 . 5/9/2016
I adore these two and I can't wait to see what happens. : )
Thank you for the update, can't wait for the next.
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| Yandere Miracle chapter 2 . 5/6/2016
Dover better get to blow his load *fist shaking* hahaha!
Another wonderful chapter here. I'm very much enjoying this story of yours my dear! Dove's theatrics are so entertaining! No wonder he caught Strauss' attention. I'd also be all up in that, seeing what kinds of reactions I can cause... ugh and it's seriously so hot. That kiss had my body tingling huhuhuhu~! The dynamic between these two is incredible, and I really have a thing for bullying horn-dog like Strauss.
I love how you carefully crafted Dover's thoughts to lean towards liking Strauss a little more. I also enjoy your side-characters and it's just another testament to how well thought this is. So keep it up!