Reviews for Lighthouse
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 5/2/2016
Well done, personifying your lighthouse. We are always so drawn to them. :)

This story would benefit from some additional proofreading, but overall, you've done a solid job. Well done!

An example of needed proofreading: "It was every mind in the room was drawn to her..." Should this be "as if every mind..." Or is the "it was" simply out of place and needing to be removed? Either would work for this sentence.