Reviews for The Girl
R.M.Spencer chapter 1 . 5/10/2016
Awesome chapter ending. I was starting to wonder where the whole thing was going and then - that. Really awesome. It needs a quick edit, there's some technical mistakes, but the narrator has a definitive voice, the dialogue is organic, the scene is well set and the turn at the end is perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter!
addledwalrus chapter 1 . 5/10/2016
How drunk was the protagonist that he didn't recognize who she was?