Fuck. That ending hurt.

But this was beautifully written. Had me convinced that Hook was some random stranger. Something told me that even with her messed up marriage she wasn't going to cheat on her husband and I was surprisingly right.

Very well done.

Damnnn, that hurt. Wonderfully told.

:'(

-As1

I literally cried! This is beautiful and so emotional!

This made me FEEL. It was a good read.

Fuck that was depressing. Really good - but also quite depressing. I wish it had a happy ending, but your ending makes for a much better story. It has more of an impact that way. I especially love how you started your story off.
Hope you have a good day!
All the best with future writings!

Really powerful piece, I liked it a lot :)

Impressive debut story here!