|Reviews for Dark Abyss|
| shika-paprika chapter 2 . 7/12/2016
As a few people mentioned in some reviews for your other stories, please make a new paragraph when a different character is speaking. I'm guessing you don't really read your reviews or know how to take criticism since your writing hasn't changed much.
| Kinola chapter 1 . 5/7/2016
Excellent beginning! Can't wait to see what happens next. :)