|Reviews for He, He, He Him, Him, Him|
| Rachel Rebecca92 chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
I don't agree with you about the ideas in the story, but I thought I would drop in a review to say that it was well written. I think you might be able to describe things a bit more but things that was really relevant was well described. The pace of the story was excellent. I wish that I could see more of the action that Daren or Sarah experienced at school, Perhaps some of the events that went on? I could definitely empathize with the character though and imagine myself being there.
Last thing, which is of very little importance, but why is this in the essay category? It's not an essay and it may get more views in another category.