Reviews for Fenris Perrywinkle: The Great Galactic Duel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Having difficulty with desert as far as they eye can see and then they are able to get into a rock outcropping for cover. Maybe a little more struggle with getting up and taking cover. It is convenient that he is able to command himself to action from struggling to get on his hands and knees. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing, literally laughing out loud when I read it. Please keep writing! |
![]() ![]() oh my godness I was actually laughing out loud. This is great! Keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing start! |