|Reviews for Star Wars From the Unknown Regions Episode IV: Return of the Order|
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 5/16/2016
This is an interesting start.
Did you mean to post four chapters in the one chapter? I believe they should (usually) be split into their own actual chapters, even though they're very short. Additionally, perhaps you meant to post this story on fanfiction?
That being said, it is a fun and interesting story. I noticed missing punctuation marks throughout, but with some additional proofreading, they should be an easy fix.
Best of luck!