Reviews for Infinite Impossibilities
Sabari chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
Very compelling and mysterious. Definitely wondering what's different, why it's different and why having a bagel is so terribly important. The conversation with the boss seems a little unrelated to the rest, but maybe it's not.
Good though, well paced and interesting.
One bit of advice though: You might want to find a way to make it clearer when Debra is thinking to herself, because at first I thought it was an abrupt shift to first person. Maybe try italics or something?