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YES YES YES FUCKIN YES

its interesting, it has a hook and they way you describe is beautiful.

send it!

Good to see this picking back up. It's one of my favorite stories.

I don't know how there are no reviews yet! I'm just now reading the first chapter and unfortunately it's all I have time to read, but this is very well written and very intriguing. You have a knack for teasing the reader into reading further. Your first few opening paragraphs were very strong and drew me in immediately with questions: Why doesn't she want to be here? Why is she at a funeral? And don't get me started on your characterization... I love Emily already because she is already depicted as a strong female character, reminiscent of works by Joss Whedon (just don't kill her off like he would). I can't wait to finish the chapters!