|Reviews for The Price|
| therainingwitch chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
that was beautiful and i agree with some of the things you say in this
| Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 6/5/2016
Chills. An excellent poem. Was thinking of the Siege of Minas Tirith throughout the poem for some reason. I like how the second and third lines of each stanza but the last rhymed. Your rhyming kept a good pace. The last stanza is powerful and love the rhyming in it. Well done!
| LostCriesofTime chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
I like this, its a truly relevant, deep and dark piece of poetry with great pace and a really catchy rhyming scheme.
One minor niggle though, the use of the word 'bleed' twice in the same stanza, during this part
The darkness bleeds,
While the innocents die and bleed
It may be intentional repetition but since the repetition didn't repeat in the other stanzas it felt a little out of place.
Your last part gave me chills, especially the bit saying
Singing the song of all ages before:
If you want Peace,
Prepare for War.
LOVE this. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!