|Reviews for Please Come To Boston|
| LorrahBear chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
This is nitpicky, but I don't feel you need to describe it as a messaging app. Just saying he got a text (or an e-mail, as it seems in this case) should be enough for all readers.
I like the setup you have here for your main character. The background of his life makes his easier to identify with and picture, plus I *really* like that you added his own self doubt concerning his reasons for wanting to get together with Willow.
Some of the sections (particularly, the bit about Daughter and Son come off overly formal and almost textbook like in the way they read, but overall, this is a really solid start with a character that I like and root for. I hope to read more. :)