Reviews for The Children's Graveyard
Vad73 chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
Cool story plot, I like where you are going. Maybe a little more description of their feelings as they enter the graveyard but I love the actual story! A little editing should do the job, well done! :DD
evilloverlord chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
Your story has a pretty good plot, and I like how you developed the characters. You could work a little on dialogue punctuation and description (its good structure, but now paint the walls, if that makes sense?), but thats it. Cool story!