Reviews for I can Jump of this Cliff
Orizielle chapter 1 . 7/6/2016
this was great, especially the last line, it was surprising, but at the same time it was not unexpected. Great poem. :)
BewareTheFeminist chapter 1 . 6/30/2016
What really got me was that last line. That really changed the tide, and made me re-read the whole thing out of complete satisfaction of the poem itself. The build up, the rise, then the very sudden fall of the mood...It was very truthful. I loved it.