|Reviews for To Thank For Your Survival|
| Barbados chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
I understand that the appeal of this rests within it's dialogue only format, but I can't help but feel that you could have a killer short story here with some extrapolation.
Not continuation. I think where it starts and ends is perfect.
Just a bit of fleshing out within the current framework. I say this because, I feel like Dr. Bagheera would be able to see that Victoria fell asleep, unless his back was turned to Adam, or something - or they were on the phone? Things like that.
It's great though, really!