Reviews for Predatory
zagato chapter 17 . 3/2/2019
Thank you for this wonderful story!
zagato chapter 10 . 3/2/2019
I still feel bad if Adrienne will betray Liam.
zagato chapter 9 . 3/2/2019
The plot twists and thickens.
zagato chapter 8 . 3/2/2019
Liam is really a power broker.
zagato chapter 7 . 3/2/2019
Great!
zagato chapter 6 . 3/2/2019
That escalated quickly.
zagato chapter 3 . 3/2/2019
Liam sounds like a smooth operator. When I hear fixer, I imagine a tough guy like Ray Donovan. Thanks.
zagato chapter 2 . 3/2/2019
I like Adrienne but am not sure about Bastian.
zagato chapter 1 . 3/2/2019
Is this neighbor the evil one? Maybe, maybe not. I have to read more to find out.
KarasunoFan chapter 17 . 11/17/2016
WOW somehow I missed this update. I think you summed it up tidily. One small edit, 8th line from the bottom "bloody idiot" not blood idiot.
XxXOoO chapter 17 . 11/17/2016
I applaud you for this.
I am so used to reading romances where there are weak, sorry excuses for a female character. As a result I found myself wrongly predicting how Adrienne would react at certain instances in the story and was happily surprised when she reacted in ways that I yearn for more authors to pen when creating scenarios for the female protagonists.
This story is a gem . I love the characters, the good and the bad, and how their stories are woven together.
I rarely write reviews, even on stories that I like, but I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
Thank you and keep doing what you do.
VictoriaJameson chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
Awesome, wonderful story. I wish it was longer, but then again, it's just right. Thank you!
Aki chapter 17 . 11/1/2016
This was such a satisfying read. It was relatively short but very well crafted, and although I have to admit the ending was the tiniest bit abrupt, the tension and emotional payoff in the scene was amazing. The character development of Adrienne was seriously something else though - there were so many layers to her that got slowly unveiled in the story, and the quiet, seemingly fragile girl you presented in the beginning was actually this strong and courageous woman. I'm so glad how clearly you showed that they were equals in the end.
I wouldn't mind an epilogue though hehe but I'm sure you have many future works that I also look forward to :)
Anyway, Congrats on finishing your story !
Anon chapter 17 . 10/31/2016
That was a great read, start through finish! I haven't read something on here for a while that manages to combine a great plot, characters, and writing into a thoughtful and enjoyable story! I look forward to reading more from you, please write another story! :D
KarasunoFan chapter 16 . 10/30/2016
Well 2 chapters to read at once is quite the treat. But man oh man what a doozy. I actually think I feel more sympathy for Liam, crazy but true...also its Halloween time in the States and this political season has gotten so bizarre I just self-medicated with like 16,000 pieces of chocolate. Sugar has given me brainitits, sorry for polluting your comment section with drivel.
Point, returning to it, well done. You have created some very layered characters and I am eager to read what happens next.
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