Reviews for 1 Riceball, 2 Riceball
Miss Hope Wright chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
This was so cute!
DWaaM chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
Well, that was brief. Not really much to comment on aside from the general impression the story left me with. In the end, it felt like a scene from an anime (or a manga) in written form. And judging by all factors, that's what you were going for, so good job there. Even though I do feel like the scene itself would've worked better in the other two mediums.

Admittedly, the story didn't leave much impact on me. I did like the ending, though.

In any case, good luck with your future projects!