|Reviews for Asteria: The First Chronicle|
| anon123345648362506 chapter 1 . 9/20/2017
Great beginning! I like the premise.
| ElvenValar chapter 4 . 9/19/2017
curious on what is going to happen next. great ch
| ElvenValar chapter 3 . 9/19/2017
oh curious on the villain more now
| ElvenValar chapter 2 . 9/19/2017
like Alysia's personality in this ch
| ElvenValar chapter 1 . 9/19/2017
| Abigail Black chapter 2 . 8/2/2016
Enjoying this so far. Well written, and good pacing. I'm liking Alysia as well. Will definitely keep reading if you post more :)
| Fiction Reader chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
Nice! Very exciting scene. I also hope the oracle is wrong, free will for the win!
| Sleeping Tree chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
I'm really liking the story so far, it seems like a good 'high fantasy' type piece in a brand new world, my favorite thing to find! Keep up the good work & the excellent sentence structures :D