|Reviews for CR: William Wallace Was a Ninja (Labyrinth September 2016)|
| Heavywordsthrown2light chapter 1 . 10/4/2016
I didn’t exactly know what was going on the whole time, but somehow, in all the madness, there was entertainment gold. A crowning achievement.
The last couple of lines made it for me.
| augie.toaste chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
You have achieved your objective. This was mad. The first third of the story was a bit slow, picked up after they broke up, and I couldn't stop laughing at the ninjas. The story has got this weird not-quite-anime, not-quite-pulp-fiction, not-quite-expendables feel to it. Great characterization; I love the way everyone simultaneously runs interference and works well together. Samurai-Ninja dynamic is my favorite.
William Wallace was a Ninja. Of course he was.
| TanteLiz chapter 1 . 7/31/2016
FUN does not begin to describe this - love it, Viper! This kind of surreal, random, deep-fried-pickles humor is definitely your forte, and in particular the voices you give your narrators when you write these. Well done!
| EventualHorizon chapter 1 . 7/27/2016
Loved it! Don't have time to list all the lovable things in this chapter but the first one that really tickled me was 'kung-fu theater'. I used to watch a cable show by that name as a kid on Saturday nights and I knew exactly what you were describing. Awesome :)