|Reviews for The Weird One|
| shinju asuka chapter 5 . 8/27/2016
Can't believe this is indeed last chapter :(
I prefer they broke up, but glad they didn't. It really shows how Bri and Gray relationship went. Plus if they broke up, the ending wouldn't be funny! xD
Love this story! Ashton was cute! lol
| BradytheJust chapter 5 . 8/27/2016
Yeah, I would have gone with Bri and Gray breaking up then maybe having Lillian walk in on Brie with another guy (maybe a student or colleague?) Anyway that's just me.
This was a great ending to a great story. The characters were wonderful and realistic, and Brie's panic attack was perfectly placed within the chapter. Ash and Lillian make a great couple and you did a good job showing their relationship.
And the "Double Dates" idea and Lillian's reaction was priceless! :D Yes some girls are just too cute to turn down. Great job as always!
| shinju asuka chapter 4 . 8/21/2016
Love this chapter, especially Ashton's reaction! Kinda wish that you wrote this chapter longer or continue it on next chapter. But the next one is the last :( what a sexy chapter!
| BradytheJust chapter 4 . 8/21/2016
Darn it, this is the next to last chapter! Awww... :(
Well the romance scene was written very well, and I really liked the interaction between Lillian and
Ashton while it was going on, made it seem like they care about one another.
I also liked how you didn't start with their scene, but instead had a few paragraphs leading up to the day, helped make it seem more real. At least for me. As always great job!
| shinju asuka chapter 3 . 8/18/2016
Lol never thought she was this direct! xDD Ashton's reaction is cute xD
| Electra001 chapter 3 . 8/14/2016
I thought it was funny how Ash kept saying ' um' and then 'you- sex?'
| BradytheJust chapter 3 . 8/13/2016
Another wonderful chapter! :D
Seriously the dialogue is witty, the characterization is spot on, and I just REALLY like this story.
You've set up an interesting "Does he like me, and what do I do about it" in this chapter and now we get to see what makes Lillian so weird in the next chapter.
I also like how Lillian deals isn't too touchy feely yet Ash is and it'll be interesting to see how it works (Because I'm pretty tactile myself, and I'm pretty good at hiding the fact that I have a crush on someone, so I can relate to Ash)
But why do I have to wait until next Saturday! I want more of your writing now! :)
Still great job as always my friend.
| BradytheJust chapter 2 . 8/7/2016
Another good chapter here.
I'm really liking the Brie-Gray subplot and how Gray needs to either get help or lose the girl, and I also liked the thoughts Lillian had on Ashton.
I can really see that he has a crush on her, and you explained it in a way where it wasn't obvious to us, but we could still pick up on it.
Your characters are great and the conflict is there, so I can't wait to see where it leads! :)
| Electra001 chapter 2 . 8/7/2016
Ok, so what is Lillian' s sexual deviance?
Did I miss something? I read both chapters twice.
Another thing, Lillian is both a professor and researcher, is that correct?
Also, is Lillian the main character in this story?
So many questions, lol
| Electra001 chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
I' m intrigued. Wonder what are those deviant tendencies they were talking about.
I like your writing style and dialogue feels real.
| BradytheJust chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
Well another wonderful story from you! :D
I personally liked the intro, simply because I am a very affectionate and tactile giving guy and I felt a connection to Lillian. Plus Bri seems like a wonderful girl :)
You did a great job describing the characters and their backgrounds without bogging me down and I'm impressed because I can't always do that.
I can't wait for more!
| shinju asuka chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
Love how you write! It's clear and the part about Lillian's background is not boring. I found some stories with first person pov are kinda boring at the character's background part. Yours isn't! Look forward to reading more!