|Reviews for Flower Among Flames|
| KH777 chapter 15 . 11/6/2016
I've read all your story up to this point and I can say it is a very good story! And well written too! :D
| John Moschos chapter 9 . 10/9/2016
Finally were able to read your new chapter. As i have said before, you are one of the best writters i have read on this site, when it comes to smouth plot progression. You don't rush the story, but still keeping it interesting. However, even though most of the chapter was good, the part about Zhao's backstory, was really uncomfortable. I suggest telling a characters backstory, either as a flashback( like you are doing with seugi), or as a discription. Because in this case, it was more like " Come on lets get this over with, want to tell seugi's backstory". I don't know if you are coming back to hers, and if you do i am sorry for the preview, but think about it for future chapters.
| John Moschos chapter 8 . 9/18/2016
Man i really like your story. It has good flow. A shame you don't get more attention. I will be waiting for future chapters.