Woot! Yeah, Collin! I love this smutty violent goodness. Eat it up with a spoon. Xoxo Robin

I WUV you calico trqyce

BWAHAHAHAHAH!
This chapter was hilarious! Just because i know how serious Colin is all the time, it was fucking hilarious! Freaking loved it! I also like that he is exploring this side of himself.

I really like Collin and Levi, their romance was a lot more satisfying (than power trip). It was also nice to see that Collin's personality rather than just his douchebaggery.

Ooh I really liked this one :D
I'm happy you expanded on it, it was nice seeing Colin lowering his defenses and their relationship evolving.

Great update.

Squee! I have to say, I absolutely love how you handled Collin's internal issues with Levi's. Collin still being in the closet and why vs Levi feeling like a dirty secret. The dress up and blow job reversal. Collin's emotional issues due to his past. That was all beautifully done...and the fucking was really hot. More, please!

As ever, your characters are like onions - multi-layered and tastes amazing when put on heat.

I'm kidding!

Or am I?

Thank you so much for the special mention but I could barely remember where we talked about Collin's potential. I could distinctly remember mentioning him in my reviews from PT... I guess or maybe in one of our personal messages here. But, of all things said and done, I am quite glad that Collin turned out they way that he did so far.

I don't want to grab credit because, in the end, the wonderful horndog is your character. I just pushed you a little to pay a bit more attention to such an interesting character. AND I LOVE EVERY DETAIL THAT YOU PUT TO MAKE HIM SUCH A COMPLEX PERSON.

Regarding this chapter review, we deal with more of Collin's hidden side that Levi unintentionally uncovers. The internalized homophobia with Collin is very, very strong although the self-awareness is also beginning to take effect on him. We see glimpses of this especially of his social commentaries of the soccer team and the way he thought about oral sex, and we this struggle in such a vulnerable, raw, and sincere POV. It's a heavy internal conflict but the romantic feelings that he acquired from Levi's love continuously trumps his hate. Which is a statement of itself.

When this narrative started, I didn't expect that Collin would become a poster child for the journey of closet guys and their battle with homophobia. And although this topic is almost breezed over because of the light-hearted and comical theme of this show, it's also true and sincere to some. We see that, after all, Collin really is a true person - good inside even if he tries to be tough on the outside. This is what makes him a great character, a brilliant development, almost perfect with his imperfections. To this, I say to you, kudos Calico.

And also, is it even possible to ignore Levi, who continues to be Collin's savior? Wonderful person, although he leaned heavily on his comical side in this chapter, not really a big development on his turf. But then, we saw much of him in former chapters. He's such a sweetheart, sincere and cute (which really strikes me strange that Collin holds on so tightly to him but at the same time understands why it is so)!

And my goodness, the kinkiness. Woof! Hot! Haha! A very, very good chapter, Calico. The waiting is definitely worth it. You continue to deliver such quality work in so little time and that's impressive! Write on! Don't think about the length and let the ideas flow, like Levi's precum!

Lots of love! More!

Nice little short! I liked it.

So. Fucking. Good.

Great characters. Great smut. Heart-meltingly sweet story :) 5/5

Great chapter! Very colorful characters!

Mooooooore mooooore mooooooooooore

Crying - Innumerably!

I was soooo happy when you updated! Finally Colin is seeing the light! I like Levi! Holding his own, forcing Colin to just admit how he feels! Who's the real slut now! LOL

I want more!

I tried my best to keep my face as straight as possible while reading this chapter. I was worried that my sister might see me crying while I was reading something, and get weirded out. And now I'm a mess. How dare you, Calico?! How dare you make me shed a tear to a very stupid line when taken out of context:

"Maybe... I'm more important then burritos..."

I can't even type properly! THIS CHAPTER WAS SO PERFECT! One of your best written ones! Unusually cheerful and bright considering your general themes. But I don't care! 'Cause Collin bb gets a Levi and a family and what! And it makes me happy!

;(

Oh no no, there're so much more.
Step 1: Fucking
Step 2: Becoming boyfriends
Step 3: Becoming lovers
Step 4: Marrying each other
Step 5: Adopting a kid
Step 6: Raising said kid
Step 7: Die