Reviews for If Only |
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![]() ![]() I genuinely like this story and hope you come back to it. It has so much potential. Their history and their future which is always in question is something I wish we can see more off. Hopefully, you get inspired to write this story again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't remember if I reviewed this back when you updated it or not, but really good chapter, and I hope you update again soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my lanta! I've read some teen pregnancy stories but this is by far the best one I have read! You're amazing! |
![]() ![]() Great chapter, really enjoyed the flashback |
![]() ![]() Loved it, especially the flashback, gave great insight of what they used to be and definitely made me ship them more, but at the same time you did her emotions justice, great job, hope u get those 30 reviews quick, I would read the whole story today if I could |
![]() ![]() That was a nice chapter. Can't wait for the next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like that flash back of their past before their daughter was born. I want to know more about their past so that i can understand their relationship more. Anyways hopefully u get 30 reviews soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww i feel really bad about Kale giving him permission to go put with a gorl that isnt her. But i guess she really loves him that she will let him be happy woth another girl. ai justhope he realizes he is making a big mistake. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. I'm only on the first chpter but its sounds good and i wanna know more about them |
![]() ![]() Please please please update! I feel so bad for her! Can't wait to find out their past. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww so sad |
![]() ![]() ![]() How cute! I ship them already |
![]() ![]() ![]() Agreeing with Woven Fray. How could he get the girl pregnant and then ask for her permission to date another girl? Can't wait to find out the backstory! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good! And also really sad :( Why can't he like her?! :'( :'( :'( :'( |
![]() ![]() He must be 'that' stupid. Like, get a girl pregnant and ask her if he could start dating someone else. I hope his mom beats him up for good*evil cackle* Alright I don't know the 'whole' story but he's making me really mad,...,,,, |