Reviews for If Only
yaraa chapter 1 . 1/13/2021
I genuinely like this story and hope you come back to it. It has so much potential. Their history and their future which is always in question is something I wish we can see more off. Hopefully, you get inspired to write this story again.
hannahward chapter 3 . 1/25/2018
Can't remember if I reviewed this back when you updated it or not, but really good chapter, and I hope you update again soon :)
cupcakecub86 chapter 3 . 7/7/2017
Oh my lanta! I've read some teen pregnancy stories but this is by far the best one I have read! You're amazing!
Hannah chapter 3 . 7/6/2017
Great chapter, really enjoyed the flashback
Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2017
Loved it, especially the flashback, gave great insight of what they used to be and definitely made me ship them more, but at the same time you did her emotions justice, great job, hope u get those 30 reviews quick, I would read the whole story today if I could
Chimel321 chapter 3 . 7/5/2017
That was a nice chapter. Can't wait for the next
yaraaaa chapter 3 . 7/5/2017
I really like that flash back of their past before their daughter was born. I want to know more about their past so that i can understand their relationship more. Anyways hopefully u get 30 reviews soon
yaraaaa chapter 2 . 7/5/2017
awww i feel really bad about Kale giving him permission to go put with a gorl that isnt her. But i guess she really loves him that she will let him be happy woth another girl. ai justhope he realizes he is making a big mistake.
yaraaaa chapter 1 . 7/5/2017
I really like this story. I'm only on the first chpter but its sounds good and i wanna know more about them
Anon chapter 2 . 5/13/2017
Please please please update! I feel so bad for her! Can't wait to find out their past.
Daughter of Athena x chapter 2 . 4/1/2017
Aww so sad
Daughter of Athena x chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
How cute! I ship them already
MayWillow chapter 2 . 12/28/2016
Agreeing with Woven Fray. How could he get the girl pregnant and then ask for her permission to date another girl?
Can't wait to find out the backstory! Please update soon!
Angel Princess 31 chapter 2 . 12/12/2016
This is so good! And also really sad :( Why can't he like her?! :'( :'( :'( :'(
Woven Fray chapter 2 . 12/8/2016
He must be 'that' stupid. Like, get a girl pregnant and ask her if he could start dating someone else. I hope his mom beats him up for good*evil cackle* Alright I don't know the 'whole' story but he's making me really mad,...,,,,
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