Reviews for The Inadequacy of Words
Lancelot chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
The poem comes off as raw, considering when you wrote it, that is totally understandable. It's not illogical, on the contrary, it is procedural and takes steps in discussing the thoughts while dressing them with the imagery commonly found in the poetic form (which I must say follows your usual style) It was enjoyable to free. But i must ask if the poem truly concerns just the inadequacy of language?
As is from what i interpreted, the inaccuracy of expression and the expression of one's personal truth and perception factors in to a degree
Phineas Angelo DeMayo chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
This is a pretty great one. Incredible feeling and writing.
BehindGrayEyes chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
I know exactly what it feels like...

But I could have never put it into words the way you did there.

Beautifully cruel.

A cruel truth wrapped in pretty words...

Keep up the good work.