Reviews for My Soldier
SheWritesIThink chapter 1 . 9/5/2016
Very beautiful. I loved that the concluding stanza was the same as one of the opening stanzas, it felt very cathartic to read. One thing though, I feel like the rhythm is a bit hard to follow as it doesn't quite flow in some places. This can be easily fixed and the poem is lovely regardless.
I pictured it being about a Holocaust survivor losing their friend, was that what you had in mind?