Reviews for Hold you until I have to let you go
alltheeagles chapter 1 . 8/27/2016
I was puzzled at first because the beginning of the story was the same as the other one, but then I got to the best-friends bit and I understood how you were showing a different perspective in this piece. Well, I like this version better! Yes, it was more angsty, but I think it was exactly this bittersweet quality that made it appeal to me, that feeling of yearning for something you know you can't have, and that strange mix of helplessness and contentment that prevents you from doing something that could upset the status quo. I think you captured that well, and I can definitely identify with the feelings here.
Crescent Moon Dancer chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
I have to admit, I liked the prequel better, but that could be just because I don't like hearing about you in pain. :( The writing was no less spectacular; it boggles my mind how you can illustrate emotion so vividly with mere words. Well done my friend.