Reviews for Cosmic Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hello I feel you have great writing skill. I want to inform you that you should join a writing contest. Check the official announcement: bit. ly/ 2Yr0vLC |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I already read and reviewed this story in the past but I read it again now and I've decided to post another review. First of all, I would like to say that I didn't remember this story neither as a memorable nor a good story and despite that I've liked it very much. I had some concerns about the story overall. However, I would like to say that my biggest concern is that it is kind of too 'young adult' for what this is really trying to accomplish... yes, she is 17 at the moment, physically though. I would probably have made the main character a little bit older as that allows more freedom... It just gets kind of frustrating for someone like me who has read the story in one sitting to read so many scenes where they are fooling around but never to the end... it is not so good to have "almost" sex scenes or very nuanced scenes every other chapter when you could just get over with it and focus on the story... On pro to the story though is that I learned to like the characters who I hated at the beginning of the story. I would love for you to keep writing this... I'm guessing you never got around to writing chapter 10 |
![]() ![]() I think you should update this. Its very well written. Honestly I’m surprised by the lack of reviews. It deserves so many. Please dont tell me this is on hiatus :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am in love with this story. All the mysteries and time leaps and Sirius' undying love even though I think he goes on the deep end and truly believe his sociopathic tendencies is his own undoing, I love it. There's a similar story called the Wolf and the Witch, the spine of the plot is similar but the main difference is yours is more plot-driven fuller whereas the Wolf and the Witch is more romantic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() Absolutely love this story! The idea of reincarnation and multiple lives that plague a love story is so sad but makes it so exciting because death is the only thing you're running away from. I'm sad that Flick's powers are growing weaker though. Seems unfair in a sense. Anyway hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() Yay finally she is alive till now. :) |
![]() ![]() Yay. She is alive. I was so certain she will endup as a dead duck again. This girl can't catch a break. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, contrary to your other chapters, chapter 7 was totally rushed. I totally understand that you were under the pressure of curing the heroine and bringing her back into action, but this chapter fails to draw deep emotions as everything happens so fast. Even Sebastian wasn't that impressive in his sorrow. The expression of this chapter has scope of improvement. But, on the brighter side, heroine is back (thank God). And I'm sure, given your creative and unique story (and your other chapters), that you'll be able to improve. All the best. |
![]() ![]() Oh for the love of God. Why the hell there is an explosion. Don't tell me Noelle will end up in hospital again. Now i am feeling sick now at the amount of hurt this poor girl is getting for no apparent reason. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is she going to die again? Please save us from the torture! I think i just want rush over with an ambulance now. P.s. Your story's cute and unique. P.p.s. Still please don't kill her. |
![]() ![]() Nooooo. Poor witch cursed to die so young. Post more chapters. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liking this so far! And Heroes is one of my favourite ATL songs hehe :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its a lovely story so far, please continue. _ |
![]() ![]() I figured someone needed to tell you at how amazing your story is. The stages of romance were so perfectly timed, that I actually had to stop reading for a moment and process everything. I absolutely adore how you created your characters, and their friendship. Please continue your quality fiction! |