I like this story so far! It has a great plot. I would love to read more of it.

Outstanding writing! Had me captivated early, and the characters were complex for a short story. I could see and feel their surroundings - this was done with masterful and simple (but not simplistic) descriptors - the writing felt effortless. Masterful execution on drawing out the characters (especially Tommy), the scenes and the feel. I was only going to read a little bit to see if I liked it, and I finished the piece in one sitting...again, really nice job on drawing the reader in - when is a longer version of this coming out? Loved it!

THIS IS THE BEST THING I HAVE EVER READ! This book is a true work of art and fantastic in every way! Everything about it captivates me and I can't stop reading! I didn't want to finnish because now I feel that no other book can compare to what I have just read! Please write more stories like this! I don't know what I'll do now that I'm done! Such a fantastic read!