|Reviews for The Maiden and the Pail|
| Fib112358 chapter 1 . 1/27/2017
A beautiful story to read.
I loved the relationship Mag has with her father, and how that is contrasted with the world she lives in as an adult.
I also loved the banta between Riordan and Mag.
| BradytheJust chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
Well, you write romance very well in my opinion.
Having Mag deal with growing up listening to her father's stories, then growing up and learning that the world is darker than stories make it out to be... perfect and unique display of character.
Having her meet the mysterious man really showed more of her character, making her much more interesting. The contrasts between them helped build their relationship, and I can see them being a cute couple ;)
The kiss was written very very well, and you described it perfectly "It was like breathing in the world, and exhaling its life with each breath she took." Amazing word choice! :D
Great story and keep it up!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2016
It's really good. I especially like how the girl reacted to Riordan.
| Mrs.Bluhm chapter 1 . 9/7/2016
This story was pleasure to read, it had me laughing as Mag is force to come face to face with a well dress stalker.