|Reviews for NanoTec: Flight to a Distant Star|
| shika-paprika chapter 3 . 9/21/2016
You really need to make the paragraphs smaller. Unless, you don't care about readers straining their eyes while trying to read this.
| Tapp chapter 1 . 9/12/2016
A twenty-one year-old on a high level position and a leader to all other engineers? He better be a super genius... either that, or this is based off of manga/anime where real world rules don't apply.
It would be helpful to break your dialogue into paragraphs and be careful of punctuation. Other than that, I think you got something very creative here so keep it up!