|Reviews for Daughter of the Alpha|
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/22
Read it again for the third time, loved it just as much as the other times! Thanks foe writing this sweet story!
| IsntItFunny chapter 15 . 1/21
Oh hell yeah! Go Dylan! I am so happy that he was able to find around an arranged mating and get AJ before she was thrown to the wolves (George). He was such a twat and would have made a horrible life for AJ. So so so happy that Dylan and AJ got their happy ending!
Sorry for all the typos, my thumbs are too big for my phone. Either way
You have a gift, author. Thank you for sharing this story with us :)
| IsntItFunny chapter 14 . 1/21
George is such an asshole! You write the characters so well but damn!
| IsntItFunny chapter 13 . 1/21
This was a really cute chapter
| IsntItFunny chapter 12 . 1/21
Yessssss! FINALLY! That was a good first time scene. I am glad the way you wrote Dylan. Despite him having almost an air of an alpha, he is just a regular wolf and a pacifist. You write him in an excrellent believable way. I love it. I also love the way you write AJ
| IsntItFunny chapter 11 . 1/21
Again, George is such a creep! He's a great antagonist. Poor Dylan :(
| IsntItFunny chapter 10 . 1/21
Noo! Damn these backward-thinking werewolves.
| IsntItFunny chapter 9 . 1/21
The tension in this chapter was amazing.
| IsntItFunny chapter 8 . 1/21
George is such a creep! I feel so bad for AJ that her parents are pushing for her to mate the beta. Dylan is where the good stuff is!
| IsntItFunny chapter 7 . 1/21
Hahahaha! AJ reacted perfectly to seeing Dylan so comfortable with nudity and being in his own skin.
| IsntItFunny chapter 6 . 1/21
I really like the length of these chapters! They're long enough to get completely caught up in the chapter but not long enough where the end is no where in sight. AJ totally has a soft spot for Dylan! Cute.
| IsntItFunny chapter 5 . 1/21
I liked how you had AJ and Dylan broach the topic of AJ being borderline brainwashed by her upbringing and that pack life is not something perfect.
| IsntItFunny chapter 4 . 1/21
AJ having to rationalize that Dylan is not attractive because of the rumours made me laugh. He's total eye candy. This chapter was very well-rounded in having opposing sides start coming together
| IsntItFunny chapter 3 . 1/21
What a tight spot for AJ to be in. George gives me the creeps.
| IsntItFunny chapter 2 . 1/21
This was a great chapter for introducing AJ to Dylan admist the rumors and seeing what he is really like. I also like the name AJ for a girl even if it is a nickname