Reviews for Are You Mine?
iHateFridays chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
This is pretty funny and that narrator is amazing! My crit is that I recommend you start a new line each time a different character speaks. Also, I think you should change the rating to T for swears.
shika-paprika chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
Pretty good story, I especially love how sassy the narrator is. My only complaint is how cluttered the dialogue is between the two characters. It was kind of hard to tell who said what.