Reviews for Amicitia |
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![]() ![]() Enoying this, the protagonist is relatable in her sorrow and loneliness. Wonder how things will procede for her now that her time there is coming to an end just as soon as she meet someone she could finally connect with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmmm, will she stay or will she go? That is the question. :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() These two have chemistry and don't even know it yet. Cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The first chapter is really good. I feel like I've met this character before. She sounds so real and believable. When she sighed and thought how her night is gonna involve reading fan fiction, that hit a chord with me. I've been there. Maybe I'm picking at it but I'm guessing you don't mention the character's name on purpose just to show how she feels insignificant in her own story and highlight her loneliness, like it's a stylistic choice. How she tries to stop herself from inventing a fictional boyfriend in her head. How she feels separated from the world and perhaps the people around her. Yeah, so all in all its cool so far. |