This was a stunning piece of fiction. You're so fantastic at writing dialogue that the characters felt alive. I adore them and this story, bravo.

halo author, i am so interested in your work, my name is Pevita, an editor for a fast growing platform, i would love to offer you something related to your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?

Ok so.. i am in absolute love with this story ..buuut every sign points to it ending badly..the notion of Ezra not getting his happy
H ending with Milo will utterly, wholeheartedly break my heart! Since the reviews arent giving anything away i just meed a yes or a no on them ending up together or not.. yeah yeah im being sooo ridiculous but for some reason i am sort of unnaturally involved in this story aaand i dont wanna feel like shit haha

Goood i jus love Ezra so much!he s just so authentic , fucked up, so well written and so adorably smitten! You deserve a thousand hearts, hugs and kisses for creating sucb a beautiful relatable flawed being

Thank you so so much for writing and finishing this story! I read the first chapters in 2017 (though I am now seeing that I didn't leave a review back then - shame on me) and was very positively surprised when I got the update notifications in my mailbox. I read the whole story within a few days and I am glad I got to read it now since I can relate to Milo's struggles way better than I could have a few years ago. Added to that, I find Milo's and Ezra's story to be special because it is so different from the usual highschool love stories and it really shows the character's progress since meeting each other.
Moreover, I especially liked the way you included Milo's relationship with all of his friends and his family. Particularly the change in his and his brother's relationship touched me and felt very authentic to me because it reminded me of myself and my sibling.
All in all, I think the pace and the ending of the story could not have been better and I am sure I will come back to reread it someday. If you decide to post those little post-story vignettes, I will definitely read those as well. In addition, I am looking forward to reading anything you might write in the future!

Really excellent. I binge read this and enjoyed it from start to finish!

This was wonderful to read 3 i first found this a few updates before your update the other day and i was so excited when i got tons of emails about all of these chapters. I just spent the past few days since reading them all. Broken Carts is one of my favorite things ive read here, and thank you for posting it. I hope youre doing really well now, and i cant wait to see more from you!

Thank you so much for this story. I really really enjoyed it!

I really like this chapter! Seems like Milo is really evolving :D

Ezra is so adorable here! Really nicely done sex scene :)

Yeeey, nice chapter. I liked the girls bathroom part :D "his boy" :D
Looking forward to the next one!

Somewhere earlier Milo listened the song swimming pools. I of course went and listened it immediately. I put it on my playlist and now whenever it plays I think of this story. I just wanted to mention how fitting that song is to your writing. The atmosphere you create is amazing and in my mind I now connect the song and your work.

Mizra!
Wow, two chapters at once! And two such awesome ones! Yeeey :D

Please don't leave us hanging! This story is one of the best on this site right now, please don't condemn it to unfinished-land!

Where are you?! T_T
I miss Milo so bad! Do update soon!

Dying for an update here!