Reviews for Broken Carts
bbarcher2888 chapter 25 . 10/24/2019
Ok so.. i am in absolute love with this story ..buuut every sign points to it ending badly..the notion of Ezra not getting his happy
H ending with Milo will utterly, wholeheartedly break my heart! Since the reviews arent giving anything away i just meed a yes or a no on them ending up together or not.. yeah yeah im being sooo ridiculous but for some reason i am sort of unnaturally involved in this story aaand i dont wanna feel like shit haha

Goood i jus love Ezra so much!he s just so authentic , fucked up, so well written and so adorably smitten! You deserve a thousand hearts, hugs and kisses for creating sucb a beautiful relatable flawed being
heyitsstupidme chapter 36 . 9/24/2019
Thank you so so much for writing and finishing this story! I read the first chapters in 2017 (though I am now seeing that I didn't leave a review back then - shame on me) and was very positively surprised when I got the update notifications in my mailbox. I read the whole story within a few days and I am glad I got to read it now since I can relate to Milo's struggles way better than I could have a few years ago. Added to that, I find Milo's and Ezra's story to be special because it is so different from the usual highschool love stories and it really shows the character's progress since meeting each other.
Moreover, I especially liked the way you included Milo's relationship with all of his friends and his family. Particularly the change in his and his brother's relationship touched me and felt very authentic to me because it reminded me of myself and my sibling.
All in all, I think the pace and the ending of the story could not have been better and I am sure I will come back to reread it someday. If you decide to post those little post-story vignettes, I will definitely read those as well. In addition, I am looking forward to reading anything you might write in the future!
Guest chapter 36 . 9/14/2019
Really excellent. I binge read this and enjoyed it from start to finish!
lawluinwoe chapter 36 . 9/13/2019
This was wonderful to read 3 i first found this a few updates before your update the other day and i was so excited when i got tons of emails about all of these chapters. I just spent the past few days since reading them all. Broken Carts is one of my favorite things ive read here, and thank you for posting it. I hope youre doing really well now, and i cant wait to see more from you!
Fryvi chapter 36 . 9/11/2019
Thank you so much for this story. I really really enjoyed it!
Fryvi chapter 31 . 9/11/2019
I really like this chapter! Seems like Milo is really evolving :D
Fryvi chapter 24 . 9/10/2019
Ezra is so adorable here! Really nicely done sex scene :)
Fryvi chapter 20 . 10/19/2017
Yeeey, nice chapter. I liked the girls bathroom part :D "his boy" :D
Looking forward to the next one!
Tuuli chapter 19 . 10/7/2017
Somewhere earlier Milo listened the song swimming pools. I of course went and listened it immediately. I put it on my playlist and now whenever it plays I think of this story. I just wanted to mention how fitting that song is to your writing. The atmosphere you create is amazing and in my mind I now connect the song and your work.
Fryvi chapter 19 . 9/25/2017
Mizra!
Wow, two chapters at once! And two such awesome ones! Yeeey :D
No name chapter 13 . 9/18/2017
Please don't leave us hanging! This story is one of the best on this site right now, please don't condemn it to unfinished-land!
Ella chapter 17 . 8/24/2017
Where are you?! T_T
I miss Milo so bad! Do update soon!
Guest chapter 17 . 8/24/2017
Dying for an update here!
Guest chapter 17 . 7/28/2017
Okay was SO not expecting the end paragraph! You are too good at this! Poor Milo and Ezra - they really are self-destructive. And they were so close too! When you're writing, and the plot seems likely to go somewhere other than intended, do you keep writing, or do you stop and reset the poit you were on to go with the original plan?
TMi The Dork in the Corner chapter 17 . 7/28/2017
I was excited and was so ready for the next scene and then... the ending happened. I was so upset. lol I'm still a little confused where you're going with this story, but I'm addicted. I can't wait to read more.
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