Reviews for On the Roof
John-the-H-is-silent chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
i liked the subtlety. You did a good job of expressing the weight of those brief moments - the ones that linger when we're lonely. You expressed a lot without saying too much. And the way you broke up the poem near the end emphasized those lines in a creative way. It was like a short narrative with a poem at the end. Nicely done.