Reviews for One Last Light
Crescent Moon Dancer chapter 1 . 9/28/2016
...Whoa. 0_0 You were right, this was different. *_* I...honestly don't quite know what to say. I've got chills, and I'm a little bit creeped out, a little bit disturbed, but still in awe of your writing skills. So well done.
alltheeagles chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
OH wow...

I definitely had a sense of forebording as I read the beginning, even without your heads-up. It grew into a feeling of despair as the story went on, like the feeling you get watching the film '300'. But still I hoped for light at the end, only to have a merciless ending. Oh well, life isn't always a bed of roses... good job with the imagery and moodiness!