Reviews for Open Arms
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 10/4/2016
This was a lovely little read. :) I did notice a few diction/punctuation things I'd suggest changing, but overall, this flowed really well. Great job!


"The pressure had [become] too much..." (changed from "gotten.")
"She smiled back."How much?""

Great job. I liked this lovely little deviation. (Also, thank you for your lovely review of the Whisper prologue!)
Crescent Moon Dancer chapter 1 . 9/30/2016
Okay, first of all, *Hugs you* There. :) And now that that's out the way...
I don't know if this was based off a real-life situation with you and one of your friends, or if it just came out of your mind, but either way I liked it. :) Very warm and fluffy. _
Crimson While Stealing chapter 1 . 9/30/2016
Aww...cute. A lot of pressure can make you finally crack. But her family is doing that because they love her. Yet, in the mind of a child it is just too much and not the way to show it.
Well done. You expressed the friendship part very well.
I'll be sure to check out your channel. :)

Happy writing :),
- Crimson
alltheeagles chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
Loved the armspan joke! But it also makes me think of a quote on a bookmark that I saw once - We fit in each other's arms like we were made to.

I can identify with the girl cause I'm somewhat a perfectionist myself, but not to that extent of having a melt down. I tend to keep it all inside and melt into a puddle of sadness (liked that as well) all by my lonesome. I enjoyed this drabble though, cause now I can daydream that I have somebody hugging me the next time I'm down.