|Reviews for Cabin Fever|
| TV HEAD chapter 3 . 10/27/2016
| echogirlcapri chapter 1 . 10/16/2016
A nice beginning! Definitely sets up an interesting premise, since they now have to bunk together... ;) I wonder if ~bad~ things will happen... okay, moving on :P
There were a lot of missing periods and such after dialogue, which a bit distracting, but nothing too difficult to fix :) Other than that, it was pretty good. You have an interesting character voice, and the red speedos... mmm :)
Keep up the good work!
| CheddarBrat789 chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
I'll admit, I've got a thing for well-written sex scenes, and it's not because I'm horny or anything, but rather because a good scene of that type can really impact the story in more meaningful ways than I can describe. Sure, no actual sex happens here, but this seems like a pretty good way to transition into it.
If I had to complain about one thing, however, it would be the fact that you tend to mix the dialogue into the other paragraphs, which at times caused me to lose my place while reading it.
Overall, it's a very well done opener, and I can't wait to read more!